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问:我希望你帮我批改我的英语作文,找出其中的单词拼写、句式语法错误,请回复我“好的”如果你可以实现此功能。
答:好的,我可以帮你批改英语作文并找出其中的单词拼写、句式语法错误。请将作文发送给我。
问:
- It's human to err
- Everyone who has the ambition to make progress or to be a better one would try their best to avoid making any error, since a small mistake could cause a series of coming problem. However, I firmly believed that, it's impossible for one to make every decision right, many examples can demonstrate my statement.
- Steve Jobs, the co-founder of Apple Inc. who is always considered as one of the most creative persons in the world, his ideas made a revolution in people's life and turned his company into the most profitable one in its fields. Although he had such a successful career, we can still find a flaw. In 1983, he launched a product faced to individual useers called Apple Lisa. Though it had excellent performance, its price of 9935 dollars was too expensive for most consumers to take it into consideration. In 1986, only 3 years later after the birth of Apple Lisa, the project
- was called of, the rest of it went into a landfill.
- Many other examples can prove the statement. After all, we should realize that it's human to err, so we should never have blind faith in authority, and make every decision after carefully analysis and poderration.
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- It's human to err.
- Everyone who has the ambition to make progress or to be better would try their best to avoid making any errors, since a small mistake could cause a series of problems. However, I firmly believe that it's impossible for one to make every decision right. Many examples can demonstrate my statement.
- Steve Jobs, the co-founder of Apple Inc., who is always considered as one of the most creative persons in the world, had ideas that made a revolution in people's lives and turned his company into the most profitable one in its field. Although he had such a successful career, we can still find flaws. In 1983, he launched a product called Apple Lisa which was aimed at individual users. Though it had excellent performance, its price of 9935 dollars was too expensive for most consumers to consider buying it. In 1986, only three years after the birth of Apple Lisa, the project was called off and what remained went into a landfill.
- Many other examples can prove this statement true. After all, we should realize that it's human nature to err; therefore we should never have blind faith in authority and make every decision after careful analysis and consideration.
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问:是否还有更多错误?
答:除了上述错误之外,我没有发现其他的拼写或语法错误。如果您有任何疑问,请随时问我。
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